Today we continue our story with the Man and his journey to Mount Success. He and his faithful horse have just taken their first steps into the Swamp of Failure. Let’s see how our hero does.
If you are just joining in this story, you may want to start from the beginning. Here is what’s posted so far:
The Intro
The Plains of Overwhelming
Let’s continue shall we?
He and his faithful horse slowly make their way through the swamp. It’s so thick they have to take one step at a time. Not only is it very muddy, it’s also very stinky. The swamp water and mud reek of old earth and dead trees. It’s enough to take one’s breath away.
Even at this early stage the trek has made some thoughts creep into the Man’s head. “Is it even worth it? Am I wasting my time? Should I really be doing this?”
He quickly blows these thoughts off but he can’t help but think about them once in a while. And he senses something nearby. Someone watching him.
Both horse and hero walk slowly with their heads bowed, concentrating on moving forward following the trail of flowers. A voice echoes through the trees and stops The Man in his tracks.
“You look like you could use a bite to eat!”
He looks around and sees a man standing by a stand full of fruit and water. He swore he could smell meat too.
“Come, come, enjoy this food and the journey through this swamp will be that much easier. You’ll be done before you know it!”
It wasn’t until he saw this convenient supply of food that realized how hungry he really was. He almost started turning towards the delicious cart of food when he felt a tug from his horse. He turned around to look at the horse and it stared at him with a warning glance.
“Come sir,” The cart man continued, “Just one little bite is all. The finest tasting fruit you’ll ever have!”
The horse nudged our hero again, reminding him of the temptations he had read about in the book. This was too easy, he thought.
The cart man seemed to have realized his thoughts as he gave him a nasty sneer. With a swing of his hand both him and the cart disappeared in a puff of smoke.
Whew, that was close. The man looked back at the path at his feet. The book said to watch the white flowers, they will lead out of the swamp. He followed the trail until it disappeared into the trees a few feet ahead of him.
The Man and his horse pushed on through the swamp, slowly, tediously. More and more doubts crept into his mind as he trudged on. Even his faithful horse seemed to slowing as he grew more and more tired. It seemed like the the mud was getting deeper.
The cart man kept showing up with more tempting offers and he kept getting closer, offering better and better offers to pull The Man away from the path. He kept getting closer and each time he became more transparent. It was the ghost of the swamp.
Eventually The Man was hearing the whispers from the ghost in his ear, taunting him, telling him to give up. He tried to ignore it. But sometimes he wanted to give up.
Between the ghostly figure that seemed to be in his head and the mud that was making it’s way up his thighs, he started wondering if he should just stop and let the grimy water take him. It would be easier. Easier than this hard work. Even easier than taking the shortcuts the ghost kept trying to show him.
But he kept his eyes on the white flower trail leading through the trees. His shoulders felt heavy and he kept having thoughts of running off the path into oblivion. It was just the ghost he reminded himself. A small nudge from the horse kept him moving forward.
He was so tired and focused on moving one step after another after the trail of flowers that he almost ran into the tree that the flowers led to. He looked up blinking the weariness out of his eyes.
The tree almost glowed in the dreariness of the swamp. It was fresh and alive. It had a big trunk and was covered in white flowers similar to the ones he had been following. It was beautiful.
Protruding from the trunk was a small branch. Hanging from the branch was a necklace with a small pendant on it. He hesitated to touch it when he heard the quiet voice of the ghost in his ears. He could feel the weight on his back with each word.
“Don’t touch that. Do you really want to do things that way?” The ghost whispered.
In this simple statement, our hero sensed some fear and knew this to be the necklace of confidence. He quickly grabbed it up and read the inscription on the back.
You have the power to create your own path. The hard times are only there if you let them. The path is clear if you want it to be. You have the power to make things work for you.
With that simple statement he had a simple realization. He heard a snarl fade in his ears and weight lift off his back. He had a choice. He could stay here and continually struggle or he could find a way to make things work his way and make his own path out of the swamp.
He walked around the tree to look beyond. It seemed even the mud was becoming less deep with each step. He looked beyond the trees and envisioned what he wanted. Before his eyes the edge of the swamp seemed to come into view. So simple.
It wasn’t long before his feet his solid ground and he heard the click clack of his horses hooves. They had finally made it out. The Man took a great big deep breath and closed his eyes.
When he opened them again he saw a great green forest ahead of him. It looked beautiful. It looked inviting. He took a step and noticed the sunlight hitting something nearby.
He looked over and saw a huge book, a tomb of knowledge. It had followed him. He figured it was time for a break anyways so he sat down in front of the book and flipped through the giant pages.
~Chris
The Forest of Experience lays beyond. It looks like a perfectly normal forest but what obstacles does it hold for our hero? Click here to find out.
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- The Man and The Plains of Overwhelming
- The Man and the Forest of Experience
- The Man and His Quest to Mount Success
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Okay Chris.
I think you should combine all of these and publish as an ebook over at Smashwords.
You’ve got the gift, Sir.
George
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Christopher D. Anderson Reply:
July 29th, 2010 at 6:46 pm
Thanks again George. You really think so? They could use a lot more editing though lol. I will check that out though, thank you very much
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